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Post by Noah T. on Sat Oct 03, 2015 7:23 pm

Name: Celestial Spirit Magic
Description: Celestial Spirit Magic is a type of Magic in which the user summons Celestial Spirits by opening their gates through the use of Celestial Spirit Gate Keys. These Keys are separated into two classes: the more common Silver Keys and the rarer Gold Keys. Each spirit has different abilities and powers to apply in battle or to support the mage summoning them.
As a S rank Mage, Noah has the ability to use his Star Suit (Star dress), which allows him to absorb the abilities of his keys in order to copy their stats and give him their spells as well. IF he does, his cloths will change, and he will count as 2 of his maximum 3 summons.
Strengths:
-Can summon a big amount of spirits to help him in battle.
-Can now use spirit suit to power up himself.
Weaknesses:
-The user is quite weak in order to be able to have strong spirits.
-Low melee capabilities.
-Spirit suit means taking 2 slots in your summon count.
Passive:
Summoning Like a Pro: Noah is able to summon his spirits and call them back without even pulling out his keys. He keeps them inside his pocket, so Noah shines a bit before summoning his spirit.
Telepathy: Maybe not telepathy itself, but by establishing a bond, Noah is able to share thoughts with his spirits.
Celestial Wardrobe: By using the same method that he uses to summon his spirits, he's able to hide cloths in the spirit world. He is also able to hide items or other stuff by touching them. This can't hide big thing (like a couch) nor PC items or weapons.

Topi the Hat:
Name: Topi the Hat
Rank: D
Description: Topi is a little 80 centimeters guy who has no legs but can float. He can't talk and instead makes silly quiet noises. He is afraid of almost everything and usually prefers to hide than fighting, but when the time comes, he can be very useful. He has ancient archive magic.
Topi:
Strengths:
-Can be useful for supporting.
Weaknesses:
-Low fighting capabilities.

  • Strength: 0
  • Speed: 20
  • Endurance: 10
  • Intelligence: 20

Cooldown: 3 posts

Ancient Archive:
Name: Ancient Archive: Information
Rank: D
Description: Just as a book, the user is able to write anything there to later one just open it there and read it. This is basically an infinite storage to save knowledge.
Strengths:
-Can be used to save information.
Weaknesses:
-No combat capabilities.
Duration: Passive
Cooldown: None

Ancient Archive:
Name: Ancient Archive: United
Rank: D
Description: The user is able to link himself to any of his allies. This way, they gain the ability to share thoughts and information, just like making their thoughts some sort of documents and passing them around.
Strengths:
-Great for communication.
-Can pass exact information, such as memories or things like that.
Weaknesses:
-Allies have to be at least 1 meter to have them join the spell. Then they can move around.
-Has no fighting capabilities.
Duration: Passive
Cooldown: Passive

Poro the White Ball:
Name: Poro the White Ball
Rank: D
Description: Poro is a little 30 centimeter tall and wide white kinda bunny. He can't talk, but he's very friendly and has fur make magic.
Spoiler:
Strengths:
-Can be useful for supporting.
Weaknesses:
-Low fighting capabilities.

  • Strength: 0
  • Speed: 20
  • Endurance: 20
  • Intelligence: 10

Cooldown: 3 posts

Fur Make Ball:
Name: Fur Make: Ball
Rank: D
Description: Poro surrounds himself with fur to make himself a huge 1 meter diameter fur ball. This way, he'll be immune to any Melee attack.
Strengths:
-Basic Defense.
Weaknesses:
-Can't block spells.
-Can't perform melee attacks in this form.
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts

Fur Make Cannon:
Name: Fur Make: Cannon
Rank: D
Description: Poro makes a fur ball in his mouth which he then spits at 12.5 meters per second with a 15 meter range. The fur ball is 15 centimeters wide and will explode upon contact damaging a single target it hits.
Strengths:
-Range damage.
Weaknesses:
-Single Target damage.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 3 posts

Clyphus the Diamond Shield:
Name: Clyphus the Diamond Shield
Rank: C
Description: Clyphus is a little 1 meter tall purple creature who always carries a 1.2 meter diamond shield. The diamond shield is able to absorb energy and redirect it, while Clyphus itself is able to use his eyes to cause something similar to hypnosis by using the shield to make his appearance bigger.
Spoiler:
Strengths:
-Strong Defensive Capabilities.
-Interesting variety of attacks.
Weaknesses:
-Can't use offensive abilities unless he's attacked first.
-If he loses his shield, he can't use spells.

  • Strength: 20
  • Speed: 30
  • Endurance: 30
  • Intelligence: 20

Cooldown: 4 posts

Bouncing Beam I:
Name: Bouncing Beam I
Rank: C
Description: When any type of ranged attacks is launched, the diamond shield can absorb it by transforming it in magic energy as long as it passes at least 5 meters from it (can also absorb energy from explosions). This nullifies such offensive spell, though it has to be C rank or lower. Then, the shield itself will shoot a red light beam towards the enemy. The beam can travel up to 25 meters in one second before it explodes (or will just explode in contact), creating a 8 meter radius explosion.
Strengths:
-Blocks an attacks at the same time.
Weaknesses:
-Has lower blocking power than a normal defensive spell.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 4 posts

Bouncing Beam II:
Name: Bouncing Beam II
Rank: C
Description: When any type of ranged attacks is launched, the diamond shield can absorb it by transforming it in magic energy as long as it passes at least 5 meters from it (can also absorb energy from explosions). This nullifies such offensive spell, though it has to be C rank or lower. Then, the shield itself will shoot a red light beam towards the enemy. The beam can travel up to 25 meters in one second before it explodes (or will just explode in contact), creating a 8 meter radius explosion.
Strengths:
-Blocks an attacks at the same time.
Weaknesses:
-Has lower blocking power than a normal defensive spell.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 4 posts

Scarlet the Head Hunter:
Name: Scarlet
Rank: B
Description: Scarlet first of all has two forms, a cat form, and a human form. In her human form, she is seen quite attractive and likes to flirt on people. She usually kisses people just because she likes to, and she is also very competitive and arrogant. In her cat form, she can't use spells, and she likes to have people cuddling her and such and usually acts a bit more dumber.
Spoiler:
Spoiler:
Strengths:
-Strong Offensive Capabilities.
-Can change form.
Weaknesses:
-Low melee capabilities.
-She needs her sniper to use spells.

  • Strength: 20
  • Speed: 60
  • Endurance: 41
  • Intelligence: 29

Cooldown: 5 posts

Headshot I:
Name: Headshot I
Rank: B
Description: Scarlet shoots with her sniper a single beam-bullet able to travel up to 40 meters in 1 second. When the bullet hits the target, it will cause a similar damage than a bullet, piercing the enemy's body (if scarlet's speed is 40 points higher than the endurance of the enemy, it will completely pierce their body). The beam is red and very thin.
Strengths:
-Incredible range.
-Difficultly spotted.
Weaknesses:
-Easily be blocked since it's a little attack.
-Will most likely only damage one target.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts

Headshot II:
Name: Headshot II
Rank: B
Description: Scarlet shoots with her sniper a single beam-bullet able to travel up to 40 meters in 1 second. When the bullet hits the target, it will cause a similar damage than a bullet, piercing the enemy's body (if scarlet's speed is 40 points higher than the endurance of the enemy, it will completely pierce their body). The beam is red and very thin.
Strengths:
-Incredible range.
-Difficultly spotted.
Weaknesses:
-Easily be blocked since it's a little attack.
-Will most likely only damage one target.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts

Kimutsuke the Cloud King:
Name: Kimutsuke the Cloud King
Rank: A
Description: Kimutsuke is a giant 10 meter tall creature with little arms and legs. He's made of some sort of white gummy material, like an eraser. He can't actually talk, but can communicate telepathically with his owner, Noah. Kimutsuke is also able to create many little clones around him for his spells. Since he is light as a cloud, he can float using the air currents.
Spoiler:

Strengths:
-Very Strong Combatant.
-Can also be used as transport.
-Can float.
Weaknesses:
-Low melee capabilities.
-Easy to hit him with an attack because of his huge size. He isn't very fast either.
-Basically weights nothing so he can't use that weights to fight.

  • Strength: 80
  • Speed: 0
  • Endurance: 65
  • Intelligence: 55

Cooldown: 6 posts

Kumo Kumo Blasting Barrage:
Name: Kumo Kumo Blasting Barrage
Rank: A
Description: Kimutsuke orders about 10 of his minions to attack. They all float towards the enemy or enemies and explode. Each of them causes a 2 meter radius explosion. Anyone caught in an explosion will receive A rank damage (can't be stacked).
Strengths:
-High destructive power.
-The clones can aim or even lock down the target before exploding.
-Friendly fire, won't damage allies.
Weaknesses:
-Each clone has a little explosion, so if they don't really target the same area, it won't be that difficult to evade.
-The clones can be destroyed with 1 B rank spell and make them instantly explode.
-The speed of each clone is 10 meters per second max.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 5 posts

Kumo Kumo Iron Cloud:
Name: Kumo Kumo Iron Cloud
Rank: B
Description: Kimutsuke hardens his body in order to block damage equal to 1 A rank or 2 B rank spells. He can still fly around but can't move his extremities while performing this attacks.
Strengths:
-Blocks damage just as a shield wood.
Weaknesses:
-Will only block attacks that hit Kimutsuke. If they hit someone else he won't prevent any damage.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 4 posts

Leo the Lion:
Name: Leo the Lion
Rank: S
Description: Leo is an orange hair human like spirit. He always uses a suit and pretty much likes woman... a lot. He is very powerful and is one of the 12 golden zodiac keys. He has Regulus magic, a magic capable of using light in their body to use powerful attacks.
Spoiler:

Strengths:
-Very Strong Combatant.
-Spells from regulus spells deal 50% more damage to dark magic users.
Weaknesses:
-Low Ranged capabilities.
-Easy to hit him
-Basically weights nothing so he can't use that weights to fight.

  • Strength: 60
  • Speed: 60
  • Endurance: 61
  • Intelligence: 69

Cooldown: 7 posts

Regulus Twin Lion Impact:
Name: Regulus Twin Lion Impact
Rank: S
Description: Leo covers his body with light energy. He then dashes towards the enemy making his body look like some sort of yellow light lion. The light may blind everyone around (including allies) in a 15 meter radius. Then, Leo tackles his target with a punch (or many to make it look cooler) to deal S rank damage and create a 22 .5 radius meter explosion (45 meters diameter).
Strengths:
-High destructive power.
-The attack can damage many enemies.
-Can Blind enemies.
Weaknesses:
-The explosion will deal A rank damage instead of S rank.
-Only 1 target can receive S rank damage.
-Blinds allies.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 7 posts

Regulus Punch:
Name: Regulus Punch
Rank: A
Description: Leo gathers light around his fist and then punches his target dealing damage by enhancing such attack. The punch is strong enough to destroy a building with ease.
Strengths:
-Simple attack.
Weaknesses:
-1 Target damage.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts


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Re: Noah's Magic

Post by Desy The Catwoman on Mon Oct 05, 2015 5:36 pm

Noah T. wrote:Name: Celestial Spirit Magic
Description: Celestial Spirit Magic is a type of Magic in which the user summons Celestial Spirits by opening their gates through the use of Celestial Spirit Gate Keys. These Keys are separated into two classes: the more common Silver Keys and the rarer Gold Keys. Each spirit has different abilities and powers to apply in battle or to support the mage summoning them.
As a S rank Mage, Noah has the ability to use his Star Suit (Star dress), which allows him to absorb the abilities of his keys in order to copy their stats and give him their spells as well. IF he does, his cloths will change, and he will count as 2 of his maximum 3 summons.
Strengths:
-Can summon a big amount of spirits to help him in battle.
-Can now use spirit suit to power up himself.
Weaknesses:
-The user is quite weak in order to be able to have strong spirits.
-Low melee capabilities.
-Spirit suit means taking 2 slots in your summon count.
Passive:
Summoning Like a Pro: Noah is able to summon his spirits and call them back without even pulling out his keys. He keeps them inside his pocket, so Noah shines a bit before summoning his spirit.
Telepathy: Maybe not telepathy itself, but by establishing a bond, Noah is able to share thoughts with his spirits.
Celestial Wardrobe: By using the same method that he uses to summon his spirits, he's able to hide cloths in the spirit world. He is also able to hide items or other stuff by touching them. This can't hide big thing (like a couch) nor PC items or weapons.

Topi the Hat:
Name: Topi the Hat
Rank: D
Description: Topi is a little 80 centimeters guy who has no legs but can float. He can't talk and instead makes silly quiet noises. He is afraid of almost everything and usually prefers to hide than fighting, but when the time comes, he can be very useful. He has ancient archive magic.
Topi:
Strengths:
-Can be useful for supporting.
Weaknesses:
-Low fighting capabilities.

  • Strength: 0
  • Speed: 20
  • Endurance: 10
  • Intelligence: 20

Cooldown: 2 posts

Ancient Archive:
Name: Ancient Archive: Information
Rank: D
Description: Just as a book, the user is able to write anything there to later one just open it there and read it. This is basically an infinite storage to save knowledge.
Strengths:
-Can be used to save information.
Weaknesses:
-No combat capabilities.
Duration: Passive
Cooldown: None

Ancient Archive:
Name: Ancient Archive: United
Rank: D
Description: The user is able to link himself to any of his allies. This way, they gain the ability to share thoughts and information, just like making their thoughts some sort of documents and passing them around.
Strengths:
-Great for communication.
-Can pass exact information, such as memories or things like that.
Weaknesses:
-Allies have to be at least 1 meter to have them join the spell. Then they can move around.
-Has no fighting capabilities.
Duration: Passive
Cooldown: Passive

Poro the White Ball:
Name: Poro the White Ball
Rank: D
Description: Poro is a little 30 centimeter tall and wide white kinda bunny. He can't talk, but he's very friendly and has fur make magic.
Spoiler:
Strengths:
-Can be useful for supporting.
Weaknesses:
-Low fighting capabilities.

  • Strength: 0
  • Speed: 20
  • Endurance: 20
  • Intelligence: 10

Cooldown: 3 posts

Fur Make Ball:
Name: Fur Make: Ball
Rank: D
Description: Poro surrounds himself with fur to make himself a huge 1 meter diameter fur ball. This way, he'll be immune to any Melee attack. Does this hinder his movement or make him unable to attack?
Strengths:
-Basic Defense.
Weaknesses:
-Can't block spells.
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts

Fur Make Cannon:
Name: Fur Make: Cannon
Rank: D
Description: Poro makes a fur ball in his mouth which he then spits at 12.5 meters per second with a 15 meter range. The fur ball is 15 centimeters wide and will explode upon contact damaging a single target it hits.
Strengths:
-Range damage.
Weaknesses:
-Single Target damage.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 3 posts

Clyphus the Diamond Shield:
Name: Clyphus the Diamond Shield
Rank: C
Description: Clyphus is a little 1 meter tall purple creature who always carries a 1.2 meter diamond shield. The diamond shield is able to absorb energy and redirect it, while Clyphus itself is able to use his eyes to cause something similar to hypnosis by using the shield to make his appearance bigger.
Spoiler:
Strengths:
-Strong Defensive Capabilities.
-Interesting variety of attacks.
Weaknesses:
-Can't use offensive abilities unless he's attacked first.
-If he loses his shield, he can't use spells.

  • Strength: 20
  • Speed: 30
  • Endurance: 30
  • Intelligence: 20

Cooldown: 3 posts

Bouncing Beam I:
Name: Bouncing Beam I
Rank: C
Description: When any type of ranged attacks is launched, the diamond shield can absorb it by transforming it in magic energy as long as it passes at least 5 meters from it (can also absorb energy from explosions). This nullifies such offensive spell, though it has to be C rank or lower. Then, the shield itself will shoot a red light beam towards the enemy. The beam can travel up to 25 meters in one second before it explodes (or will just explode in contact), creating a 8 meter radius explosion.
Strengths:
-Blocks an attacks at the same time.
Weaknesses:
-Has lower blocking power than a normal defensive spell.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 4 posts

Bouncing Beam II:
Name: Bouncing Beam II
Rank: C
Description: When any type of ranged attacks is launched, the diamond shield can absorb it by transforming it in magic energy as long as it passes at least 5 meters from it (can also absorb energy from explosions). This nullifies such offensive spell, though it has to be C rank or lower. Then, the shield itself will shoot a red light beam towards the enemy. The beam can travel up to 25 meters in one second before it explodes (or will just explode in contact), creating a 8 meter radius explosion.
Strengths:
-Blocks an attacks at the same time.
Weaknesses:
-Has lower blocking power than a normal defensive spell.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 4 posts

Scarlet the Head Hunter:
Name: Scarlet
Rank: B
Description: Scarlet first of all has two forms, a cat form, and a human form. In her human form, she is seen quite attractive and likes to flirt on people. She usually kisses people just because she likes to, and she is also very competitive and arrogant. In her cat form, she can't use spells, and she likes to have people cuddling her and such and usually acts a bit more dumber.
Spoiler:
Spoiler:
Strengths:
-Strong Offensive Capabilities.
-Can change form.
Weaknesses:
-Low melee capabilities.
-She needs her sniper to use spells.

  • Strength: 20
  • Speed: 60
  • Endurance: 41
  • Intelligence: 29

Cooldown: 4 posts

Headshot I:
Name: Headshot I
Rank: B
Description: Scarlet shoots with her sniper a single beam-bullet able to travel up to 40 meters in 1 second. When the bullet hits the target, it will cause a similar damage than a bullet, piercing the enemy's body (if scarlet's speed is 40 points higher than the endurance of the enemy, it will completely pierce their body). The beam is red and very thin.
Strengths:
-Incredible range.
-Difficultly spotted.
Weaknesses:
-Easily be blocked since it's a little attack.
-Will most likely only damage one target.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts

Headshot II:
Name: Headshot II
Rank: B
Description: Scarlet shoots with her sniper a single beam-bullet able to travel up to 40 meters in 1 second. When the bullet hits the target, it will cause a similar damage than a bullet, piercing the enemy's body (if scarlet's speed is 40 points higher than the endurance of the enemy, it will completely pierce their body). The beam is red and very thin.
Strengths:
-Incredible range.
-Difficultly spotted.
Weaknesses:
-Easily be blocked since it's a little attack.
-Will most likely only damage one target.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts

Kimutsuke the Cloud King:
Name: Kimutsuke the Cloud King
Rank: A
Description: Kimutsuke is a giant 10 meter tall creature with little arms and legs. He's made of some sort of white gummy material, like an eraser. He can't actually talk, but can communicate telepathically with his owner, Noah. Kimutsuke is also able to create many little clones around him for his spells. Since he is light as a cloud, he can float using the air currents.
Spoiler:

Strengths:
-Very Strong Combatant.
-Can also be used as transport.
-Can float.
Weaknesses:
-Low melee capabilities.
-Easy to hit him with an attack because of his huge size. He isn't very fast either.
-Basically weights nothing so he can't use that weights to fight.

  • Strength: 80
  • Speed: 0
  • Endurance: 65
  • Intelligence: 55

Cooldown: 4 posts

Kumo Kumo Blasting Barrage:
Name: Kumo Kumo Blasting Barrage
Rank: A
Description: Kimutsuke orders about 10 of his minions to attack. They all float towards the enemy or enemies and explode. Each of them causes a 2 meter radius explosion. Anyone caught in an explosion will receive A rank damage. I'm assuming this deals damage to allies as well? Also, this damage doesn't stack, each target takes A rank max.
Strengths:
-High destructive power.
-The clones can aim or even lock down the target before exploding.
Weaknesses:
-Each clone has a little explosion, so if they don't really target the same area, it won't be that difficult to evade.
-The clones can be destroyed with 1 B rank spell and make them instantly explode.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 4 posts

Kumo Kumo Iron Cloud:
Name: Kumo Kumo Iron Cloud
Rank: B
Description: Kimutsuke hardens his body in order to block damage equal to 1 A rank or 2 B rank spells.
Strengths:
-Blocks damage just as a shield wood.
Weaknesses:
-Will only block attacks that hit Kimutsuke. If they hit someone else he won't prevent any damage. Is he restricted while doing this? Is he capable of moving or attacking?
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 4 posts

Leo the Lion:
Name: Leo the Lion
Rank: S
Description: Leo is an orange hair human like spirit. He always uses a suit and pretty much likes woman... a lot. He is very powerful and is one of the 12 golden zodiac keys. He has Regulus magic, a magic capable of using light in their body to use powerful attacks.
Spoiler:

Strengths:
-Very Strong Combatant.
-Spells from regulus spells deal 50% more damage to dark magic users.
Weaknesses:
-Low Ranged capabilities.
-Easy to hit him
-Basically weights nothing so he can't use that weights to fight.

  • Strength: 60
  • Speed: 60
  • Endurance: 61
  • Intelligence: 69

Cooldown: 6 posts

Regulus Twin Lion Impact:
Name: Regulus Twin Lion Impact
Rank: S
Description: Leo covers his body with light energy. He then dashes towards the enemy making his body look like some sort of yellow light lion. The light may blind everyone around (including allies) in a 15 meter radius. Then, Leo tackles his target with a punch (or many to make it look cooler) to deal S rank damage and create a 22 .5 radius meter explosion (45 meters diameter). Does the explosion harm your allies as well? I would of thought so if the blind does. Also, please add that this spell may blind in your strengths and weaknesses since it's not a guarantee.
Strengths:
-High destructive power.
-The attack can damage many enemies.
-Blinds enemies.
Weaknesses:
-The explosion will deal A rank damage instead of S rank.
-Only 1 target can receive S rank damage.
-Blinds allies.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 7 posts

Regulus Punch:
Name: Regulus Punch
Rank: A
Description: Leo gathers light around his fist and then punches his target dealing damage by enhancing such attack. The punch is strong enough to destroy a building with ease.
Strengths:
-Simple attack.
Weaknesses:
-1 Target damage.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts


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Post by Noah T. on Mon Oct 05, 2015 7:59 pm

Bump ^^ and yes, never stacking damage :P my bad

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Post by Desy The Catwoman on Tue Oct 06, 2015 3:49 am

Last round hopefully. :)

Kumo Kumo Blasting Barrage - I reckon this should have a CD of 5.

Speaking of cool downs, yours are a little jumbled when it comes to your spirits. Each rank of spirit should have at least a post longer CD to balance them out. Push Leo to seven and increase the others by one so they line up.

Everything else seems fine so I'll approve it once these edits are done. :)
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Post by Noah T. on Tue Oct 06, 2015 5:34 pm

Great, fixed, how about that?

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Post by Desy The Catwoman on Tue Oct 06, 2015 5:37 pm

DENIED!

Not really, approved. :p
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